Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 




When will I find it?
I hear so much about it...
The feelings you get when you kiss,
When you hold hands,
When you just simply see each other smile.
When will I get to fall in love?

A wise person said, "Don't look for love,
Love will come to you someday."
Well, I believe my day is here,
But I'm not in love.

I know in time
I will fall in love.
It's just like the wise person said...
It takes time... don't rush anything.
It will come to you one day.
You'll just have to wait.

Wait until that one person comes along
Who makes you feel all gushy inside when you see him,
Who makes you feel like the Queen of England when you are down,
Who makes everything right when everything seems so wrong.

I know I'll fall in love.
I just have to wait until it's my turn.
Well, I'm waiting,
And I hope someone will soon give me my turn.
But until then I'll have to wait,
And wait...
©2005-2010 ~x-kk
:iconx-kk:

Author's Comments

This hopefully describes "teenage love"...i did not write this...

Comments


love 2 2 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconbrimarie60:
i'm absoulutely in love with it...GREAT job. REALLY makes the reader think in many point of views. And if u actually think u wanna look for love...that's wrong. Dun take ur time to look for someone...wait till someone takes there time to find YOU. Then you'll know they were looking for the REAL u.... My poetry is somewhat like that. check it out if u'd like!

--
bRi bRi
+. tRuSt .+ can taKe yeaRs to buiLd uP
but jUst seCoNds to [ sHatteR ]
:iconairbender01:
Very well written.

--
Aang,you'll be in my heart. No matter what they say.
:iconiniquitire:
i like that confidence you portrayed throughout. It gives everyone with those same questions a glimmer of hope and reassurance...:D nice.

--
:pointl::bulletblack:The world is a comedy to those that think, a tragedy to those that feel:bulletblack::pointr:
HoraceWaldpole
:iconxbutterflycrazyx:
this poem represents me so much. im 14 and im going through that right now.
i am so glad that i have found this poem and glad that other people my age are going through the same thing.
well done great work !!
:iconsuperoreo:
I love this poem , too!!!!
I'm thirteen. I know that's pretty young. I mean, i'm not looking for deeepp adulterated love, just something sweet. Eveyrone else in my grade has it, honestly. I think i'm the only one that wants it but doesn't have it. It's great that others feel the same way :) :heart:

--
~ i am just a fistful of dust. ~
:iconsuperoreo:
OMFGOMFGOMFG
IFLT!!! i love this so much. it captures my feelings and my yearnings so beautifully. I feel like this all the time. I"m thirteen, eighth grade and it seems as though I'm the only one who hasn't experienced teenage love. Thank you so much for writing this.

--
~ i am just a fistful of dust. ~
:iconxbutterflycrazyx:
thats not young at all, i started fancing this guy when i was thirteen and i always wanted it to be something really amazing and i'm still waiting now for that one guy,one year later. it takes time for it to happen but we have to make it happen by being confident with ourselves and others so as long as your happy being you others will be happy too.

--
if it's meant to be then why are we still apart
if you are my one true love then why are you breaking my heart.

Details

May 2, 2005
1.1 KB
177 KB
1280×960

Statistics

7
16 [who?]
482 (0 today)
24 (0 today)

Share

Link
Thumb

Site Map